A rise/a fall/betrayal/a feast.
This was really good, and that ending, hot damn... I do hope fiction becomes a regular feature of this substack, I was on the fence with buying your book (since I'm not a huge fan of historical fiction) but you just earned yourself a reader brother!
Wow, I would suggest a comic book and/or graphic novel for this. Riveting storytelling. Still working on your book BTW